Story Writing

Writing a story is fun. So, for our writing exercise, we have a picture below. All you need to do is write a story based on the sequence of events shown in the picture. You can give the man a name you like.

Write your story on the comment box below and the teacher will check it for you.

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11 Responses to “Story Writing”

  1. Prajay says:

    One day a man was walking on road , then two people planned to rob money from him. Then they silently followed that man and they took him to a corner and beat him and stole his wallet, then the man wasn’t able to get up the robbers ran from there then a guy came he saw that guy and asked for help but he didn’t, then other guy toooo passed he also didn’t help, then the man saw his friend and he shouted “brooo help” then that friend called ambulance the line was engaged so he took him with his hands and finally helped him them the man thanked.

  2. Sobhan says:

    Mr. Erick Thomson was a Wall Street Investment Banker, a highly revered person in the financial industry for his money making skills who wined and dined with the who’s who of the highest echelon of society, a man of eclectic taste who was admired for everything of his, be his choice of paintings to the classic wheels he owned to the yacht parties he hosted. But behind the larger than life portrait Mr. Thomson equally vitriolic and loathed people who were not as privileged as him and disdained them as an inferior rabble and maintained this status quo all his life till that day, which completely changed his thinking. It was a wintery day, Mr. Thomson like every day was getting ready for his day. He donned his Versace overcoat, strapped his Ocean rock studded Omega, checked for his cards in his pearl studded Cartier purse and started off for his doctor-prescribed-walk to office, which was just across the park nearby his residence in Down Town Manhattan. As he approached the dense shrubs in the middle of the park, he was suddenly accosted by two not-so-gentle looking man with pistols in their hand. Before Mr. Thomson could realize and raise an alarm, he was thrashed to ground and kicked mercilessly. The robbers took away all they could lay their hands on, even taking the overcoat, leaving the bleeding old man precariously in that chilly morning. After some time as Mr. Thomson regained consciousness, he realized he was bleeding profusely and he couldn’t move because of the severed pain in his legs. He yelled for help to fellow passerby, many of whom looked like him-privileged; to whom seconds at Nasdaq were more valuable than helping and old man left in lurch. It was after some time hearing Mr. Thomson the white knight came in form of Mr. Babal Khan, a taxi driver by profession, a kind of person who Mr. Thomson would not have let even touch his briefcase. Seeing the pitiable condition of Mr. Thomson, Mr. Khan immediately informed the Thomson’s family and wasting no time drove him to a hospital. Mr. Thomson had again lost consciousness due to continuous blood loss but the immediate and timely action of Mr. Khan saved his life. The generosity and magnanimity of a man like Mr. Khan who lived on daily earnings ,who left his own bread and butter to help him moved his heart. It led him to change the prism of view that he had towards the less privileged members of society. He understood that one’s true wealth is one’s compassion and generosity towards all. Richness of a Man can never be judged from the wealth in his bank but by the purity and love in one’s heart. Well, for Mr. Thomson, last heard, he and Mr. Khan were holidaying in his south Nevada ranch along with their families and were discussing the strategy of Mr. Khan’s idea of starting a Taxi service company, this time with Mr. Thomson as a Guardian Angel.

  3. Suma says:

    I need more pictures like this for my school primary 4 lesson plans. Can you please tell me where I can get a series of pictures like this?

  4. Lee says:

    Corrections to Sheena’s story. Aren’t stories mostly told in past tense?

    What was wrong with Sheena’s description of the clothes other than missing commas?

    You don’t need a definite article for institutions (hospital). There can be more than one hospital in a city.

    Just trying to help.

  5. kais says:

    It is easy to guess what has happened to this unfortunate guy and describe it. So to make it fun I will try to introduce it otherwise, I will try to invert the situation. I would say:
    Despite his good-looking and angelic face, Mr. Jones is a terrible thief. One day he decided to meet his partners and make a plan for a new hold up. They met at a dark corner. To his big surprise, his partners has repented and asked him to do the same. When he refused firmly and threatened them, they pushed him back and took off his nice coat in order to bring it back to Mr. Dave from who it was stolen.
    Mr. Jones was down asking for help. None dare do something for him. Minute after minute, hour after hour, time was moving slowly and his pain becoming more and more unbearable. Guess what has happened. It’s the irony of fate. Mr. Dave, who was stolen few weeks ago by Mr. Jones, was passing nearby. He recognized him and took him to the hospital.
    Talking to the nurse, Mr. Jones promised to change and to be a good guy once his is out.

    • teachertya says:

      that was an interesting story, Kais. Is that what we called “karma”? :)

      Please note of the corrections:

      It is easy to guess what has happened to this unfortunate guy and describe it. So to make it fun I will try to introduce it otherwise, I will try to invert the situation. I would say:
      Despite his good-looking and angelic face, Mr. Jones is a terrible thief. One day, he decided to meet his partners and make a plan for a new hold up. They met at a dark corner. To his big surprise, his partners has have repented and asked him to do the same. When he firmly refused firmly and threatened them, they pushed him back and took off his nice coat in order to bring it back to Mr. Dave from who it was stolen.
      Mr. Jones was down asking for help. None dare to do something for him. Minute after minute, hour after hour, time was moving slowly and his pain was becoming more and more unbearable. Guess what has happened. ? It’s the irony of fate. Mr. Dave, who was stolen robbed few weeks ago by Mr. Jones, was passing nearby. He recognized him and took him to the hospital.
      While Ttalking to the nurse, Mr. Jones promised to change and to be a good guy once his is out.

  6. sheena says:

    The man, Jack is walking one day. Two bad guys take his wallet and beat him. Jack cannot stand because he is so hurt. After some time, one man who is running saw him but he didn’t help Jack. Then one man wearing good clothes see him and Jack call him but the man just look him. Then Muslim man saw Jack lying on the ground. He called ambulance and help Jack to go to hospital.Because of the Muslim man, Jack is safe.

    • teachertya says:

      that’s a good story, sheena. keep it up!

      please note the correction below:

      The man, One day, Jack is walking one day. when two bad guys take his wallet and beat him. Jack cannot stand because he is so hurt. After some time, one man who is running saw sees him but he didn’t doesn’t help Jack. Then one a businessman wearing good clothes sees him, and Jack calls him but the man just looks at him. Then a Muslim man saw sees Jack who is lying on the ground. He called calls the ambulance and helps Jack to go to the hospital.Because of the Muslim man, Jack is safe.

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